evocates: (GH: Royals - Surfacing)
• just another dreamer • ([personal profile] evocates) wrote2008-09-24 07:09 pm

[FIC] Gakuen Heaven: Notches on the Bedpost - Naruse

So Kaga had Shinomiya and Curfew, so I might as well have something too. xD Besides, I adore the idea of everyone->Hide and Hide certainly needs his own series~

I wrote this quite a long time ago and is only posting now. Haha.

Notches on the Bedpost: Naruse

Characters/Pairings:
Naruse->Nakajima
Rating: R
Words: 743
Summary: In which Naruse has a match, and Nakajima is unintentionally a tease of the highest order. Or was that intentionally?


Naruse weighed the racket in his hand and grinned, looking at his dark-haired opponent across the court. Nakajima Hideaki might top his level and possibly the school in academics (and top them all literally too, according to rumours), but Naruse was that in the realm of sports – in tennis – he was unbeatable.

He threw the bright yellow ball up in the air, and served.

Several games later, Naruse had to admit that Nakajima was good – or at least, he was damn fast. They were both sweating by now, though Nakajima was definitely sweating and panting harder than he was. Well, that was a given, Naruse grinned to himself, given that he had made Nakajima run around the courts so much. (He had done that partly to tire out his opponent, partly to try to make him lose his usual unflappable composure and partly because... Nakajima did look rather attractive in shorts. And when his shirt rode up when he jumped.)

He was still smiling when the umpire shouted for them to change courts.

He watched as Nakajima approached the bench. Niwa tossed him a water bottle, and they smiled at each other (the sun must be particularly hot today; Naruse felt a rush of heat at the sight of that smile) before Nakajima...

Wait. He wasn’t going to... oh my god.

Naruse could feel his jaw falling open as Nakajima tilted his head back and poured the entire bottle of water over himself. His mouth went entirely dry, eyes riveted on the sight of pale skin gleaming in a constellation under the bright afternoon sun. Water droplets ran from his chin down the line of his neck, into his shirt and if his shirt wasn’t skin-tight before it was now, showing the curve of every single muscle that Nakajima had and Naruse could only stare, eyes wide and mouth open.

He thought that he had entirely stopped breathing. Everyone in that area, including Niwa, seemed to have frozen mid-motion and was just watching as Nakajima practically moaned in front of all of them, eyes closed and thoroughly enjoying the feel of cool water on his skin. He dropped the water bottle and reached up, running his fingers through his dark hair. The sun and the water played tricks on Naruse’s eyes – for a moment, Nakajima’s hair looked blue, blue like the brightest and most expensive of sapphires, like the colour of the sea under the starlight.

Naruse’s knees felt weak when Nakajima’s hands ran down his own body and pulled his shirt over his head, revealing a pale, sculpted chest. Later, he would swear that he could hear the sound of everyone swallowing simultaneously. He had to stifle a moan when Nakajima took a white towel from his bag and started to touch himself, drying every inch of that pale, absolutely flawless skin.

His nipples were a dusky brown, Naruse noted to himself, dazed. He wore dog tags, silver and engraved.

Nakajima shook out the water in his hair and dried it vigorously with the towel. This time, Naruse definitely heard the sound of a collective, disappointed sigh when Nakajima slipped on a new, dry shirt. His shorts were clinging to his skin still, Naruse realized, but Nakajima was wearing tights underneath. Skin-tight tights that hid nothing of Nakajima’s crotch. Naruse gulped to himself and took his position on the courts, moving like a robot.

When he served again, he double-faulted.

The rest of the game was nearly a sham, because Naruse kept stumbling and missing on his returns, and his serves either fault or were so weak that even a child could return them. He was trying desperately to hide the erection tenting his shorts, but it was obvious that the more he tried to hide it, the more Nakajima noticed. Nakajima was smirking at him oh-so-smugly, like he had won already, and Naruse wanted to just storm over the net and clock him a good one. But then Nakajima would jump to smash or tilt his head back, and Naruse would be blinded all over again by the sight of pale, smooth skin.

Needless to say, Nakajima won the match.

Naruse stormed grumpily off the courts, twisting the cap off his bottle like it had personally offended him. He turned, glaring at Nakajima as the older boy walked past.

Nakajima smirked, and licked his lips. His plush, pink, wet lips.

Naruse dropped the bottle, his palm suddenly sweaty.

Nakajima laughed.

End

The subtitle of this series: Hide is an evil, evil man.

[identity profile] karinablue-rose.livejournal.com 2008-09-24 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I have to agree with you on that score.Poor Naruse!Nakajima certainly has his number.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-09-25 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha, totally. Thank you! ♥

[identity profile] karinablue-rose.livejournal.com 2008-09-25 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Your welcome.
Gives new meaning the phrase "hot and bothered"!

[identity profile] sommar.livejournal.com 2008-09-24 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!

*still laughing my ass off*

XDDD

oh god, even I had my mouth open when you described Hide pouring the water over himself ^^ Hides a bad boy and I love it XDDDD

thank you for sharing this!

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-09-25 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Hide is a horrible, horrible man. And very sexy. And totally unscrupulous in using that very sexiness to his advantage. xD

I'm glad I made you laugh! ♥ Thank you for commenting!

[identity profile] pollinia.livejournal.com 2008-09-25 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
*dies a little from the immense happy* This is so in-character that I weep. Your boys are hilarious--so confident and pumped full of hormones and ARE YOU SURE THIS WASN'T AN EPISODE OF THE SERIES THAT I SOMEHOW MISSED?!

Seriously, this is great. *thumbs up*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-09-25 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I HAD LOTS OF PRACTICE. [livejournal.com profile] kagayachou and I (we write together often. And it's usually EPICFICS with long convoluted plots because we're both crazy) have this insane series named Surfacing with Niwa/Nakajima/Shichijo/Saionji foursome that's still ongoing. (More pimping, wot?) And ahhahahaa yes. C'mon, they're boys from a BL series - they HAVE to be hormonal. Especially Hide. C'mon, the guy's a pheromone machine or something.

NO IT IS NOT BUT I AM GREATLY FLATTERED YOU THINK SO BB.

Thank youuuu~~~ ♥

[identity profile] gfvm.livejournal.com 2008-09-26 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
you know and that is exactly why i love hide..... he is sooo freaking bad.....and hot...

but yea i agree.... surfacing series is good... i love it when a new one comes out.... but first and for most i loves he hide... and i know it is the author's perspective on the whole thing... i just don't thunk hide is bad enough... i mean come on... for "recreation" he likes licking elbows.....hehheeh and other things... like pens......

ever since i started with things with gakuen... hide has always been my fave... next to tets.... but the problem is i have a thing with the guys with short "black" hair, glasses, dress nice, have a 'tude....and just have that underlying sexuality about them... like you never know what they are thinking....

BTW does any one have any of the newer character books what has more extensive profiles of everyone... and knows what it says.... caz my best friend got it(well the scans) and she did alot of contrasting and comparing of characters in their profile.. and apparently hide has a sister........OMGTFBBQ.......... hide broke my brain... bad enough none of us really know why he has dog tags...or why there is that huge underlying thing with him and kaoru...like the pic from those 2 getting caught in the bath by keita and kazuki... and the pic from in the menu with hide over top him and kaoru is pulling on his tie and they looks like hey gonna be doing dome "studying" hehehehe

hide breaks my brain... in a good way.


but love the story...i would love to see what he would do to the other members of the school......

[identity profile] gfvm.livejournal.com 2008-09-26 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
yea.... like kouya from ouran... and brad from weiss..... i lovies them.......

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-09-27 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Heh, I get your point about how Hide isn't 'bad enough'. Sometimes I worry about it too, but in Surfacing I have to expand on their characterisations beyond what canon shows us. To put it bluntly, in GH a lot of the characters are juyst archtypes, without much further development. This is especially true in the case of the Royal Four - because Iwai and Shinomiya both have their family backstories, Taki has his thing with the Vice-Chairman. To make a long series like Surfacing actually work, both Kaga and I have to expand on these characteristics given using what is in canon and a lot of theorising.

Which is why in Surfacing Hide is more than just 'a sexmachine' as someone had mentioned. Hide is very sensual, but sex isn't all that he is. He has an older sister and a mother without a father. He wants to be a lawyer. There's NO backstory for him given in canon beyond his and Niwa's story, so I had to build it up all by myself. I think I can safely say that Kaga and I made all four of them human - Omi isn't just a slightly odd computer geek, Kaoru isn't just 'Queen', Niwa isn't just 'King, and Hide isn't just a sexmachine. As sexy and adult-like these boys seem to be, they're teenage boys, and we try to make Surfacing as real as it can be in that context.

Canon - all three of them - has given us little hints here and there that these boys aren't just the archtypes that they were assigned (Hide's obvious jealousy in manga 1; his and Kaoru's relationship in the game; Niwa being able to solve complex maths problems; Kaoru and Omi's past...). It's part of what makes a character human for us, and so we expand on those things.

^^

[identity profile] xldreamerlx.livejournal.com 2008-09-29 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG I CAN'T LOVE THIS MORE. :D :D I have this massive crush on Hide and you've just made it a gazillion times worse. *is esctatic*

Seriously, I will be stalking your journal for more. I love how he's so deliciously evil and sex-personified and cripples Naruse. Ngh.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-09-29 01:02 pm (UTC)(link)
EVERYONE SHOULD LOVE HIDE. Seriously, this man is irresistible. xDD

Well, you can click the 'gakuen heaven' tab and check out the Surfacing series/my other GH fics to tide you over until I get another bunny for this series? xD

♥ Thank youuuu~

[identity profile] purple-truck.livejournal.com 2008-10-20 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
*nosebleed* God, Hide you just can't help to be sexy... Oh, crap the images... THEY BURN!

That was hot! After almost three months of avoiding internet temptations theb reading this... I'm really sorry but that's all I can say. I think that permanently damage my brain...

I can't wait for Niwa. *wishful thinking*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-20 02:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Hhahaha no, he just can't help it. Sometimes he just makes it WORST. xDDD

♥♥♥ Thank you!

Hahaha maybe?

[identity profile] purple-truck.livejournal.com 2008-10-21 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Which makes him even more ♥♥♥!!! You're welcome. ^.~ It's a really fun read! You made me grin like an idiot since last night! And I'm still grinning!

Please? Do not deny yourself of the love that is N/N.

[identity profile] sylc.livejournal.com 2010-08-01 11:57 am (UTC)(link)
I love this story! It made me laugh. It's so well written as well as comical, full of sexual heat, and it just flows beautifully.

Thank you for a wonderfully good read. Definitely one of my favourite stories for this fandom.